Kumarmani Mahakul

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Necklaces And Garlands Around Bride - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

This is the ceremonial festival of marriage,
A bride is decorated with garlands and rings,
Necklaces she has worn with costly ornaments,
Beauty is attracting all, groom has to come.

Every poem you create here is your daughter,
Beauty grows with words and lines within,
Daughter poem looks like a bride for visitors,
Readers describe her beauty and give comments.

Every comment is a necklace of diamond sure,
Every word of review comment is gold ring,
Many comments a poem wears are garlands,
Fragrance of flowers in garlands spreads beauty.

Cutie bride poem motivates mind of father poet,
Father poet giving ornaments of words in alliteration,
He has decorated his daughter poem in literature home,
Guest poets are reviewers are visitors to bless her.

Bride poem eternally sings glory of eternal father,
All reviewing poets come here and feel very happy,
They offer her, necklaces of gold and diamond,
Many offer garlands giving their best wishes.

Getting greetings and wearing garlands she is lucky,
Her mother-in-law's house is very, very far,
Count of comment garlands and necklaces increase,
Throughout her way of journey poets give blessings.

Poem bride loves to marry God as groom in procession,
So she travels eternally wearing infinite ornaments,
Carrying values and virtues she lives in every tune,
Finally poem bride meets God and God accepts her hand.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,13 September 2017. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty, poem, poet

Form: Prose Poem


Comments about Necklaces And Garlands Around Bride by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Hazel Durham (9/21/2017 9:33:00 AM)


    A bride, the star of the show as she is adorned with gifts and compliments just like a poet unveiling his poem for the first time! Great write so original and creative! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (9/14/2017 12:18:00 AM)


    Very beautiful comparison of a poem to a bride and each positive comment.....a jewel adorning a bride, also the delight of a poet on seeing his poem praised to that of a proud father on seeing his beautiful daughter decked in jewels! Enjoyed reading this lovely poem. (10) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 13, 2017



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