Near This Pond An Autumn Day Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Near This Pond An Autumn Day

Rating: 4.9


Reed plants have grown,
Grown are the plans here,
Near this pond they think,
An autumn day has come.
Inside the pond we see
Fresh breeze swings more,
Lotus flowers gently smile,
White grass flowers giggle.

Water is covered by leaves,
Nature has given near joy,
Humming beauty is summing,
Day's gentle glaze is calm.

White grass flowers we see,
Reed plants wear crowns,
Brightness is adored well,
Wild-date plants do meeting.
Natural happening is felt,
Before cyclone time is calm,
An autumn day declares freedom.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,09 October 2018. All rights reserved.

Near This Pond An Autumn Day
Tuesday, October 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,beauty,nature,perception
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,27, September 2018. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 09 October 2018

Great charm of nature during autumn deftly transported into this amazing poem. Truly a treat to nature lovers. Thanks for sharing it, Kumarmani ji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2018

Date & Time: 10/9/2018 9: 24: 00 PM Member: Douglas Scotney Comment: Photo did come through KM. Nice poem though, but how does humming beauty sum?

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Muzahidul Reza 10 October 2018

humming beauty........ can hardly sum, well commment

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 October 2018

A lovely imaginative write. It brings out the beauty and wonders of nature. Well crafted write.10+++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 October 2018

Kumarmani, such a lovely poem....................10+++++++++++++++

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Dogma Daniman 08 June 2020

Autumn plays near pond with marvellous appearance. Autumn sings and motivates us. The beauty of autumn is painted by your artistic mind here.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2019

Spirituality and nature, two of the more recurring themes, what a wonderful, imaginative write this! And with an equally beautiful picture accompanying.

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Mj Lemon 26 October 2018

A moment of pause and a moment of clarity. This verse reminds us what perfect stillness, clam, is. A great work, Kumarmani.

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M Asim Nehal 19 October 2018

Superb poem nicely backed by a wonderful picture. A picture says thousand words and your poem speaks volumes.10+

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 October 2018

There was a similar poem of yours I have read last week about reeds; and thanks to it, I was able to finally notice the reeds by a brook, where it meets the sea: a place I regularly go; but, strange enough, I never new they were there! But, your poem and this one, made me look at them and think about your poem!

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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