Neither Mom Nor Child Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Neither Mom Nor Child

Rating: 5.0


Mister Dan and his family members
Had a seven-day restful vacation;
They went to the beach in Balingasay,
To feel the beauty of the blue ocean.

Many travelers spent the days with fun,
Taking fine pictures, building sand castles;
Parents and children swam in the vast sea,
Tourists took a walk as they picked some shells.

Mister Dan witnessed an emergency,
So did the alert and quick life-savers;
Mother and her child were carried away
By the angry waves in open waters.

The happiness turned into utter fear,
Because the nature became odd and wild;
People cried for help beneath the heaven,
Mister Dan had saved neither mom nor child.

Neither Mom Nor Child
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Tutaan 13 March 2019

This I figure out who saved mom and her child. Not Mr Dan because there were alert and quick life-savers who did their job immediately to save Mom and child from drowning. A fine riddle, dear Bernard.................10+++++++++++++

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Rajnish Manga 03 March 2019

Mother and her child were carried away By the angry waves in open waters.... // A very emotional portrayal of how nature's fury can turn a happy moment into a life long mourning for a lovely family.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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