Eyan Desir

Rookie - 15 Points (caribbean)

.... Never Give Up - Poem by Eyan Desir

Adversity smiles
At weakening hearts
On roads to success
Mountains must be climbed
Rivers must be crossed
Battles must be fought
Many will be lost
After dark comes light
After sorrow comes joy
Even if roads are blocked
Hearts must never give up


Comments about .... Never Give Up by Eyan Desir

  • (2/11/2010 11:41:00 PM)


    good write...good rejuvenating potion to aching love-hearts (Report) Reply

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  • (2/7/2010 8:25:00 AM)


    It's remarkable words, but this way is for the elite Eyan..10...
    Best wishes,
    Tsira
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  • (2/6/2010 11:21:00 PM)


    A little poem big in essence. 10 for this (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (2/1/2010 7:07:00 AM)


    inspiring thoughts.....
    full of words to ponder....
    food for thoughts


    Maia
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  • (1/28/2010 6:20:00 PM)


    owwww..am glad ur here ian..i think, i really miss ur works...ok, allow me to leave these words for this piece..it is absolutely true..rivers must be crossed, regardless of whatever..that is if there is courage..a simple piece but full of nice words..it may give hope to hopeless, , it may give joy to the lonely hearts, it made me smile to be exact and it is a must..IT IS A MUST... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 9, 2010


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