... ☻ A Deal With The Devil (Dark) Poem by Eyan Desir

This is cool, I also write dark poetry you should go and take a look :) 10 from me!

Cool. ' at the end of the river', ' drink a stream of pain', ' fed with juicy lies' You use words very wisely. We must of course ultimately pay the price for all deals we make with the devil, for all days we have each become a ' minion of evil'. Nice write. Brilliantly impressive.

wuu.. it realld did touch my heart.. thanks for wiriting :)

so meaningful and touching..tnx for this poem eyan

Fantastic poem &im nt at all scared bt i loved reading it...10++

Repercussions of evil well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry that reminds us of Karma - the law of Retributive Justice. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

'Devil's gold is sweet'... perhaps the devil knows it best! ...a sweet work on devil and its gold...thanks

A devil should not emanate out of our ambitions and greed, in order to devour our values.Extremely nice poem with good imageries of thoughts.

devil is the dark side of self, i suppose...

Beautiful imagery, put pictures in my head, very well written, good choice of words.