... ☻ A Deal With The Devil (Dark) Poem by Eyan Desir

... ☻ A Deal With The Devil (Dark)

Rating: 4.8



Foolish ambitions
The greed of gluttons
Dissembles the heart
Desires burn flesh
Summon him from the dark
Come forth minion of evil
Give your gift to him
Fulfill his heart fantasies
At the end of the river
Drink a stream of pain
Devil's gold is sweet
All who come to take
Will be fed with juicy lies
Fool there is no escape
A deal is a deal
You must pay its price


All rights Eyan Desir
20th Oct 2209

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gracey Newman 30 October 2009

This is cool, I also write dark poetry you should go and take a look :) 10 from me!

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Rex Mathew Mathew 31 October 2009

Cool. ' at the end of the river', ' drink a stream of pain', ' fed with juicy lies' You use words very wisely. We must of course ultimately pay the price for all deals we make with the devil, for all days we have each become a ' minion of evil'. Nice write. Brilliantly impressive.

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özLem Tunca 31 October 2009

wuu.. it realld did touch my heart.. thanks for wiriting :)

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Connie Tallada 31 October 2009

so meaningful and touching..tnx for this poem eyan

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Seema(Aanamika) 80 30 October 2009

Fantastic poem &im nt at all scared bt i loved reading it...10++

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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2015

Repercussions of evil well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry that reminds us of Karma - the law of Retributive Justice. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 November 2009

'Devil's gold is sweet'... perhaps the devil knows it best! ...a sweet work on devil and its gold...thanks

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 01 November 2009

A devil should not emanate out of our ambitions and greed, in order to devour our values.Extremely nice poem with good imageries of thoughts.

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Indira Babbellapati 01 November 2009

devil is the dark side of self, i suppose...

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Mal Sharp 31 October 2009

Beautiful imagery, put pictures in my head, very well written, good choice of words.

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