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... ☻ A Deal With The Devil (Dark)

Rating: 4.8

Foolish ambitions
The greed of gluttons
Dissembles the heart
Desires burn flesh
Summon him from the dark
Come forth minion of evil
Give your gift to him
Fulfill his heart fantasies
At the end of the river
Drink a stream of pain
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Chinedu Dike 28 May 2015
Repercussions of evil well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry that reminds us of Karma - the law of Retributive Justice. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Kesav Easwaran 07 November 2009
'Devil's gold is sweet'... perhaps the devil knows it best! ...a sweet work on devil and its gold...thanks
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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 01 November 2009
A devil should not emanate out of our ambitions and greed, in order to devour our values.Extremely nice poem with good imageries of thoughts.
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Indira Babbellapati 01 November 2009
devil is the dark side of self, i suppose...
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Mal Sharp 31 October 2009
Beautiful imagery, put pictures in my head, very well written, good choice of words.
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Mehreen Mujeeb 31 October 2009
wow, very intense. thought provoking expressions.
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Elsee Daniel 31 October 2009
its a thought provoking poem 10+
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Connie Tallada 31 October 2009
so meaningful and touching..tnx for this poem eyan
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özLem Tunca 31 October 2009
wuu.. it realld did touch my heart.. thanks for wiriting :)
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Rex Mathew Mathew 31 October 2009
Cool. ' at the end of the river', ' drink a stream of pain', ' fed with juicy lies' You use words very wisely. We must of course ultimately pay the price for all deals we make with the devil, for all days we have each become a ' minion of evil'. Nice write. Brilliantly impressive.
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