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.. An Eye For Eye....

Rating: 3.2

A heart for a heart
Today a chain saw smiles
My pains will be locked away
Now give me back my tears!
The ones that ran for years!

Give me back my happiness!
Feelings you killed with sadness!
Give me back my heart!
The one you split in half!

Give me back the wings of love
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Jen Capaldi 10 October 2009

great write. both sadness and vengence in equal balance put together superbly by an excellent poet. it holds much truth in it for so many injustices done to others. i love it! again my friend a wonderful work of true emotion and art.! 10's all of the way. Jen

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Frostie Lisette 09 October 2009

I absolutely love this poem, it has strong feeling. I love how you wrote it with so much emotion<33

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2009

Eye for an eye yes what a vengeful wrath a thing that can tear nothing but the heart

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yellowbell alamanda 08 October 2009

If only i can say this to the people who shade my sky with gray... 10 Eyan...

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Catrina Heart 30 September 2009

Seems to be its pay back time my dear friend............well done with great rhymes and touching moving monologues! ! !

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Rachael Strunk 29 September 2009

I really like this! Its relatable, creative but not so comlex and filled with illlutions that I can't understand. It has a lot of emotion in it but you managed to keep it balanced =)

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Isam Hussain 29 September 2009

The poem is pregnant with angry emotions; but well composed and to the point. I like expressing anger in words and on paper; it is therapeutic and if controlled it can produce a good poem. On a minor point, please correct some spelling mistakes: split for splited; whiles for while; An Eye for An Eye! ! ! ! for! ! ! ! an eye for Eye. Thank you for inviting me to read this poem.

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Mark Nwagwu 29 September 2009

Give me back..... why? I ask. If you gave it, then let it stay that way, with whomsoever received it and have the joy that there was something worth giving in you that another has received. Ronald's comments below are helpful. I'll go and read him.

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Patrick A. Martin 28 September 2009

revenge is the starngest form of self harm. Why is it so important that we feel we should pay someone back for a precieved harm they have done us instead of being grateful for the lesson they've given us.

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loved it, was short. but DEFINETLY took me more than 12 seconds! ! ! ! ! ! lolz. really liked it, expressionful and i can understand how ur feeling right now.

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