. I Can'T Stop Loving Her! (Dark Poem by Eyan Desir
. I Can'T Stop Loving Her! (Dark
Behind her doors, live a pool of joy.
Whiles smiles cover our face
A mist of confusion
Awaits at our gates
After days of gladness
The bitterness of love kicks in
Like hungry dogs we fight!
Spitting words that can break a heart!
Like branches we fall apart
Her memories torture my head
Loneliness keeps creeping in
Whiles love sucks the air I breathe
My mind finds it difficult
To erase her sweet memories
Enough my heart surrenders!
I'm back knocking on her doors.
...Thanks for reading
Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desire.
June 26th 2009
whoa i love it i like the part when u said Spitting words that can break a heart! Like branches we fall apart
oh boy, this is so sweet and lovely too i like the way you write short and acceptable ideas well done at all luwi
, .. i absolutely knw the feeling.. it's really hard to move on...GOD BLESS..
i never read this one it's good..i like this part Spitting words that can break a heart! Like branches we fall apart..its really good
hope you've moved on... its good to share... specialy when the readers can relate. 10.
'Her memories torture my head, Loneliness keeps creeping in'..this line caught me.. great write..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/12/2024 11:24:01 PM # 1.0.0
Very well expressed. Format is beautiful. Felt as though you spoken my new lines in a much effective way. Beautiful craft.