. I Can'T Stop Loving Her! (Dark Poem by Eyan Desir

. I Can'T Stop Loving Her! (Dark

Rating: 3.2

Behind her doors, live a pool of joy.
Whiles smiles cover our face
A mist of confusion
Awaits at our gates
After days of gladness
The bitterness of love kicks in
Like hungry dogs we fight!
Spitting words that can break a heart!
Like branches we fall apart
Her memories torture my head
Loneliness keeps creeping in
Whiles love sucks the air I breathe
My mind finds it difficult
To erase her sweet memories
Enough my heart surrenders!
I'm back knocking on her doors.

...Thanks for reading

Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desire.
June 26th 2009

Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

expressive beautiful poem...Thanks!

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Surya . 15 July 2009

really wonderful expression. i love this poem. thanx for sharing voted10 surya

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 July 2009

very expressive....love never dies like any relationship.... its normal to experience that way and start again for a new beginning...a renewal of love.. the acceptance of faults...very nice Eyan.. humbleness shows... 10++++ lovelots, maia

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linzi- kidd 12 July 2009

i agree with all the other comments. this poem is extraordinaire! . you have talent. keep it up.

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Broken Heart 11 July 2009

honestly! ! i loved it! ! no wordx 4 dis poem! ! so frm ur heart i guess: D

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 December 2015

True love is forever! Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

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Elen De Guzman 04 March 2010

, .. i absolutely knw the feeling.. it's really hard to move on...GOD BLESS..

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i never read this one it's good..i like this part Spitting words that can break a heart! Like branches we fall apart..its really good

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yellowbell alamanda 09 October 2009

hope you've moved on... its good to share... specialy when the readers can relate. 10.

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Inday Prising 30 July 2009

'Her memories torture my head, Loneliness keeps creeping in'..this line caught me.. great write..

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