Never To Reach The Angels Poem by issam hal

Never To Reach The Angels

Rating: 5.0

In my life i hadn't ever seen a girl so wise so beauty.
Makes me waiting tomorrow comes to only see the pretty.
Nothing as beautiful as her charming face.
And nothing as charming as her beautiful kiss.
A girl so white so bright she is from the minority.
Like a dove flying peacefully spreads her sanctity.
Whenever i see her i hope bring her all flowers.
Whenever i leave her i miss her all hours.
But now im crying for a dream i thought it reality.
Was a mirage broke my serenity.
While, i woke up from reveries and i got a sense.
That my ruby, wouldn't be just a trance.
So i woo god to keep me in love this graceful pretty.
She will never be mine but im just waiting her generosity.
To bless me a fanatic slave wanna stay under her bliss.
Drown and drown in her love until getting my spirit in paradise

Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 09 July 2010

'Nothing as beautiful as her charming face./And nothing as charming as her beautiful kiss.' Favorite lines. I'm noticing a common themes in your poems, and the subject I really like.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

Nice composition, last two lines are beautiful.10++

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Nathaniel Booker 05 September 2008

Quite often, people think that men are incapable of showing and expressing true feelings of love, adoration and affection... well this wonderful gem dispells all of those myths... Very Sweet and Enchanting... she is blessed if you've found her... and in store for a wondrous treasure if you haven't and when you do. Be Well **10**

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Anjali Sinha 03 September 2008

wow! ! ! dream--mirage-reveries and finally paradise. lovely. +10 regards anjali

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2008

wonderfull! ! ! ! ! ! ........thanks.......10

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