When Isolation Is A Home Poem by issam hal

When Isolation Is A Home

Rating: 5.0

I will spend a night staring at the moon.
Because i know it's my time to be alone.
When everyone follows the lights and follows the crowd.
I'll keep my soul waits for this boundless road.
So cold, im chilly here i barely smoke.
It sounds to me hard to move like im stable rock.
And so quiet, i hear the silence speaks leading me to the place
Where i found the eternal peace.
That peace i admit it a fake.
I know i can not keep i can not take.
But it's the intimate world.
I live passion, devotion that i couldn't ever hold.
Coz all i can taste is this moment.
And all i can breathe is this life.
And all i can feel is this inspiration.
Reminds me of allll the things i crave.
and allll the love i save.

Nathaniel Booker 04 September 2008

When I saw all the 'L's in the word 'all' before I began to read, I wasn't sure that it was going to work here. But the poem masterfully captured the feeling and sound of a stiff cold lonely breeze blowing through a chasm or cavity. I know this lonliness well, this fading away while fighting for the love that can save you. Great Write! Be Well

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 July 2010

‘When everyone follows the lights and follows the crowd. I’ll keep my soul waits for this boundless road.’ ~ Indeed so and verily exact…let us be our own…interiorize…discover the in-built pitcher for ‘allll the love i save.’…deep poem …emotives are finestly worded… thanks for such a nice poem… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2010

strong as the musk.... a heady mix of ideas....well conceived cheers

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The expression of the poem was well portrayed. Could feel the emotion of the writer. Good one! ; D

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Adedolapo Olisa 01 October 2008

An in depth piece of love for right though you might be the only one on the track CLAP! CLAP! ........

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 September 2008

an ammmmazing composition indeed! ........10

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