New Morning Poem by Pia Andersson

New Morning

Rating: 5.0


Let your eyes
confirm me.

Let my breasts rest
in the palm of your hands,
safe,
in their nest.

Cover my body,
with sunflower seeds.

Leave the blue.

Walk through the yellow field
with me
without looking back.

Let there be gold.
Let there be truth.
Let there be light.

Let there be
a new morning.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aashish Ameya 15 April 2007

all your poems are nice...you dnt need any specific comments.keep good work going on...

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Shane Markie 02 October 2006

I'll agree with Melvina Germain in saying these words are beyond compare in reference & relation to the subject matter used in this poem. Shane

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Nimal Dunuhinga 23 September 2006

A new dawn and dawning of fresh thoughts of a soul! Love it seems the morning brings?

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Melvina Germain 09 September 2006

Absolutely beautiful Pia, I like it very much--Melvina

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Preeti - is here! 04 September 2006

The blend b/w nature, love and longing is perfect here. Lovely poem! Preets

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2010

Let my breast rest on your palms, cover my body with sunflower seeds let there be gold, truth and life very nice lines..

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Akram Awadat 27 October 2009

ya sure it is very beautiful lines a big value poem 10+

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Milda Morse 07 October 2007

Brillant expression in simplest terms. A definate 10. You don't write often but when you do your words shine. Love your work and view it with envy. Milda

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 October 2007

I see a nymph in a beautiful morning.

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Broken Peaces 27 August 2007

Beautiful conception beautifully written Chris

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