Leaves covering my body
your sweat protecting my body
your tears in my hair
the moon is whispering
you are now his woman
wow! wow! wow!
this is superb, short, but glad i didn't miss it :)
congrats, your poem suggests truth nothing but truth, so that a woman..in relation to a man welldefined...........................
The gravity of the moon controls the shifting of the ocean's tides,
The warmth of a woman's love dispels night's darkness in encroaching eyes.
I love moon whipers!
whether 'simply' poetry, or based on life, this is so raw, and so honest, that it makes the reader feel...which is of course, the essence of good poetry...
later sweet swede..Richard..x..
So lovely Pia. Your poem has beauty in it's simplicity. Thank you.
Touching.....deep and soft like a Woman!
It is true..it is deep..
too keep yourself...
from being found.....iip
LOVELY..SIMPLY DEEP..THE IMAGERY AND THOUGHT BOUNDLESS
great work, well done
that's make me feel what u write
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