Clear Water Poem by Pia Andersson

Clear Water

Rating: 4.8


Diving,
into clear water.
The light
hurts my eyes,
the warmth
protects me
from myself.

I see your hand
in the water.
An open hand,
waiting for me
to grab it,
to grab life,
to grab fear,
to embrace you.

The shore
can no longer be seen.
I float
weightless,
fearless,
into your arms.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will Barber 29 January 2007

This is simply (complexly) beautiful. Totally original, this poem strikes to the heart. - Will

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Duncan Wyllie 08 April 2007

Dear Pia I found my-self reading this piece again, it is so lovely well done Take care and have a lovely Easter All the best Oh and before I forget, thankyou for the card Love duncan X

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 13 July 2007

Meaning hidden yet clearly seen

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Sandra Fowler 15 July 2007

Very lovely and compelling. I like what you see from your own personal window on the world. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Adeline Foster 28 August 2007

Great depth, A lovely poem. Adeline

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R.benjamin Abate 29 April 2013

This is fantastic. I feel like it's all happening to me. -ralph

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 July 2011

a touching ink.liked the flow and wording and emotion involved.

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Steven Silent Wolf 22 November 2009

Compelling! Very like my own - 'a note.'

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Merna Ibrahim 26 October 2009

Great poem! ! ....++10++ Thanks a lot for your comment...Merna

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 October 2009

Your style is great.In simple language you are expressing a lot of theme; and your theme are very deeply philosophical.

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