No Frills Poem by Richard Wlodarski

No Frills

Rating: 5.0

Little girl
Sunshine face
So beaming
Eyes bulging
Lips smiling
So wanting
The cherries
Tasting them
In her mind
Stomach waits
Never full
So hungry
Her father
Whisks daughter
Away now
To poor side
Of aisles

Wednesday, July 24, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: daughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 30 July 2024

Ever so powerfully painted! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! .. +++++++++++++++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 01 August 2024

They say that 'a picture paints a thousand words'...my mental picture painted these few words. But that mental picture continues to haunt me. A world of THX to you, becca for your awesome feedback!

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Rebecca Navarre 30 July 2024

Beauty of child and sorrow of the situation, ever so heart touchingly expressed! ..

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Richard Wlodarski 01 August 2024

My brother had shared that experience with me and I was so heart-broken that I felt I needed to write this poem. Even now as I eat cherries, I visualize that moment.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 July 2024

Brilliant description on the state of Canadians Bravo! ! !

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Richard Wlodarski 28 July 2024

That image has invaded my mind...and eating cherries just isn't the same anymore.

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