No Remedy Poem by Daniel Brick

No Remedy



There are days when getting up is no
remedy. So why bother? The door won't
open. When I push through, I slip
on the muddy floor and smash my head.

In class, the teacher startles me:
'OK, that's good. Now get all the vomit
out. Don't be squeamish.' Then, he goes
to another student. I cradle my smashed

head. It's going to be a month of hospital
visits. Will it be as bad as before? Much
worse, my hurting head says. Already the news
tells us, the decent fighter lost. He hurts

bad. Slick men with gold in their teeth
targeted him. He fell like mist. What had
he hoped to remedy today? And now puny rain
falls where he fell, not far from where I fell.

You know its stench - There's no remedy.

(based on an idea by Vincent Poson)

Sunday, May 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,fight,fighting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 04 February 2016

Is it a new tendency in poetry to cut off the verse ''no//remedy'', vomit//out, hospital// visits, hurts//bad, rain//falls, much//worse ? In classical poetry one never finds the phaenomenon.In Homer for example, I think, it is only once the case met.

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Liza Sudina 25 October 2015

Was it after a funny party at school? Grown ups are always more cynic.

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Allotey Abossey 12 June 2015

I read it with much muse and fun.. Well selected diction and good organization. God bless you

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