Ally Sharp

No Tomorrow - Poem by Ally Sharp

I want to go
to feel no more.
Im hurting so bad
my heart is saw.

I hurt through the day
and cry through the night.
I can no longer stay
and battle this fight.
So a goodbye letter
i must write.

I am so tired
of this constant pain.
For it never ends
only starts again

The cuts and burns
i can not hide.
But the real pain
is deep inside.

if this is life,
pain and surrow
I'll take the knife
and end my tomorrow.

So this is it
im ending it all
My minds made up
im taking the fall.

I take the knife
dig into my skin
My blood starts to pour
as the room starts to spin

As i hit the floor i see a light
and am certain
everything will be alright

Comments about No Tomorrow by Ally Sharp

  • Elena Sandu (5/3/2011 11:04:00 PM)

    Oh dear life is more than pain.
    Hold on to it, survive and give us more to read. The biggest happiness comes after pain. To understand and open wide our hearts we need to overcome great pain.
    Don't give up, survive and let whole world to heal your heart, please try to write by letting free your heart, then try to lock away the mind.
    Heart always say love! While mind is reasoning to find ways to hate..
    So love is the answer get out share your heart to anything that comes around: the sky, a tree, a cat, family, or anything you see.Let us read more, your poem gives me rivers of sadness, I pray for the day to see happiness blossomed, it is not far, may you find your smiles.
    Thank you for share,10
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  • (5/3/2011 11:04:00 PM)

    Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery.
    Fine poetics.
    A big...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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  • Romeo Della Valle (5/3/2011 10:49:00 PM)

    A well crafted and poignant write! You definitely got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Yes indeed, please, keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed (5/3/2011 10:38:00 PM)

    You have great talent as a poet. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011

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