A Few Words Poem by Unwritten Soul

A Few Words

Rating: 4.6


A few words
Could bring more than a sound
Touch the ears turn wry to golden smile
or sharper than a glass to cut into pieces

Misunderstanding,
Winding up a road between us
Separating emotions out of mind from the case
Would be wrong to let ego reign the grace
How ignorant sometimes heart could be?
Deaf two ears, and blinding opened eyes
Pretend the silence is your voice
Avoiding you is not a choice

Misunderstanding
A curse of few words
Lead a way to stray from the truth
A plead for apologizing replied by ignoring
A few words used for fighting and shouting and hurting
You............Silence
Standing still but beautifully broken
I looked into your eyes and surprised
In a mirror of a story without lies
Heard...listened a word...'sorry'
Encodes a meaning of 'Forgive me'
No, your lips tightly sealed
It is your voice within sent to me

A few words
I used as the sharp glass tease
Cut you deeply, and you bleed
Saw it all behind the naked eyes
But you still standing to hold me
Never mind how wrong i can be
How i can find a magic in a few words
To heal your pain stained and clot
Regretting how wrong i did to you
To believe unreal and count your tears
I never thought so hurtful this way
When i thinking of myself it linking to you
I hurting myself whenever i hurt you

A few words
I tried to search for proper sorry
Would you blind your eyes, deaf two ears?
Words crime sound nothing but now i fear?
It fears me as i don't to lose you
...Forget the past and start a new
we never meant to be hurt...
You replied with A few words
In form of softness creating golden smile
Your sweet words neutralize the voice of bile
I learned how to speak when i was a child
But just understanding 'A few words' now

Misunderstanding
Lesson of learning to understand
If i can turn back each time i hurt you
Will avoid this bruises stamp on you
Now, between this winding road
As i standing at the aisle of choices
Picking either Emotions or Mind
Decided to fuse, balance these two
A relevant choice for not to hurt you
Sanity tell all to me,
We meet not to wait this end
We born to be happy till the end of time

A few words
Powerful or hurtful
Time to choose...

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The twisted story just for a write to point what
words can do..for me it's better silent than let
people hurt by our words, unless we make say it better
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Friday, February 11, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,friendship,hurt,love,words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thank you Remi Anderson for lending your voice here. You are welcomed to do the same for my poems if you want to..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 14 May 2016

.....so true, and so much wisdom in this write... and actually I feel I needed to read this thank you soul for this beautiful message ?

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Unwritten Soul 15 May 2016

You will be fine sunprincess, clouds will take all your tears...and tears will rain and green the land. Hope you are fine and better now_Soul

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Tom Billsborough 09 May 2016

wow! I wasn't expecting this. It has great depth and the feelings and thoughts are so well sustained right through a longer poem. There are some very beautiful lines... As I standing at the aisle of choices is my favourite but it's a close run thing with many others. An easy ten for my Unwritten Soul Tom Billsborough

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Unwritten Soul 10 May 2016

Oh thank you Tom for your very moving words...you delighted my day :)

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Chan Mongol 13 May 2016

Few words are good enough for any best or worst thing. Words meant for lives. The poet wrote, A few words Powerful or hurtful Time to choose ______That says it all. Thank you poet for such a beautiful poem. You sure cleared up your ideas. The poem is very special for me. Number 10 is for such a brilliant work.

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Indira Renganathan 28 October 2021

True.. words have power....blessing or cursing is all from the strength and power f words only...rightly well crafted poem..top score

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2021

The prime focus of this poem is on misunderstanding! I appreciated the poet's natural expression. A very commendable style of penning..Top score.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 October 2021

A beautiful great message by a great Poet.Brilliant poem, dear Soul. YOU make me remain whole! From PF till PH still Great Soul

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 October 2021

My response is too long so PH did not add that here and I got a RED warning, you know that yourself, but I will give that same comment you deserve, dear Unwritten Soul! 5 Stars greatest and fullest on TOP!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 October 2021

Revisiting this wonderful poem of great insight and wisdom. So rightly said and brilliantly expressed. To my Poem List.

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