No Visa For Heart Now! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

No Visa For Heart Now!

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He saw her photograph,
And fell for her beauty.

Somehow managed to get her contact,
And he became servant of her thoughts.

They exchanged few messages,
Love transmitted through wireless satellite.

She found comfort in him,
And he found comfort with her.

Country demanded visa formalities,
Religion demanded conversion.

With this hassle heart got strangulated,
What visa and why conversion?

When dreams can travel and spirits can travel,
Why can’t two hearts?

Her heart left the body,
And so did his heart,
Both met at cosmic point,
To live for eternal -time.

Monday, September 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 31 December 2015

I love this country....where no visa no restriction let me know such place other than your heart so that I may come and live with my beloved....

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Rajnish Manga 28 November 2015

This kind of a love story (with minor changes here and there) but with far more fatal denouement has been read and seen and commented upon since ancient times. This is something very tragic but the walls built by our society remain insurmountable. The way you have presented it makes it extremely poignant.Thanks, Md. Asim ji. Country demanded visa formalities, Religion demanded conversion.

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2015

Ishq na puchche deen dharam ishq na puchche zat, yes, love doesn't requires a passport or visa, but to materialize it in m a marriage, it has to cross so many human made obstacles.......................10

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T Rajan Evol 29 September 2015

Wonderful poem, Heart is attached to body thence this problem.

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Sanjukta Nag 29 September 2015

this is our civilization... where law is more important than the emotion of a human heart which results tragic endings of lives. very heart touching poem.

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