Not Totally Naked Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Not Totally Naked

Rating: 5.0


I tied my own shoes.
I was conscious of it.
All day I was aware...
I was not totally naked.

And my feet,
Have only been seen...
By a selected few.
None of whom now...
See me tie my own shoes.

And when I purchase another pair...
Who will care,
What color sox I will choose to wear?
Or if they match.

I tied my own shoes.
I was conscious of it.
All day I was aware...
I was not totally naked.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 02 September 2008

Doing your own thing is never be a burden to others, for as long as you do not intrude to others privacy. Do your thing for yourself with confidence, share it if it will do dood to others. Well penned, a 10.

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