Now Its In Front Of Me Poem by sagar patil.

Now Its In Front Of Me

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still somewhere inside me.
there is a little like remaining
a new heartbeat came up
i got to know that i am still alive
some such tenacity
is there in this moment...
where was this moment of mine

now its in front of me.
should i do or should i live little..
should i kiss joys...
or should i cry a little..
should i die or should i live little..

the body burning down in the sun.
got the shade of a tree.
like the smile an angry kid
come back on a little cajoling..
something like that is what my heart
is feelings...

on the year old would there is a applied
some such mercy is there in this moment
where was this moment of mine..

like a kite with broken string
was this life of mine..
today i m here whatever tomorrow
takes place or not known
was my story everyday...
mow a new bond calls me from behind..
why does a worry for tomorrow trouble me.
such a prickle is there in this moment.
where was this moment of mine...

now its in front of me.
should i do or should i live little..
should i kiss joys...
or should i cry a little..
should i die or should i live little..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indranil Bhaduri 05 October 2012

Very thoughtful piece...Liked it...

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Lalit Kumar Deb 05 October 2012

In every moment of our lives we are called upon to make choices. What we are and what we stand for is the result of our choices. No repents. One has to take every day as it comes to him, but one has to plan for eternity forgetting the subtle and material things of life. Nice flow of thoughts.

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Neela Nath Das 05 October 2012

Dilemma of thought. What to do, to embrace new life or to stick to past grief--this is the thought, I think.Very nice.

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Mg Confused 05 October 2012

u should have little... i think this question is now a days common for every person. nyc poem

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Poetheart Morgan 05 October 2012

Please Sagar, life, kiss, joy and pain, all make part of ours lifes. Make a option for you love. Beautiful Poem. In War and love worth everything.Go ahead.

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Stewart Gideon 04 December 2012

should I die or should I live a little sometimes in life we find ourselves contemplating something like this. Whatever happens, just keep finding a reason to live a little...just live anyway

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Rouge Groer 12 October 2012

its wonderful. i like the way you put your thoughts into words :))

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Shivani Misra 12 October 2012

I like it :) nice one. Waiting to read more. Thank u.

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Cierrah Smiles 09 October 2012

Everybody has chooses they must make... they face these choices and live with the outcome but either way you go you still must live with the choose... now its in front of me. should i do or should i live little.. should i kiss joys... or should i cry a little.. should i die or should i live little.. Are my fav. lines. I love this poem great work

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Lalit Kumar Deb 09 October 2012

At every turn in our lives we have to make a choice. What we are is the result of our past choices. At present the choice before us is either to look back and weep or to look forward and smile at the new horizons open for us. The first choice will make us philosopher- poets and the second will make you us optimist. Anyway nice poem.

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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