~ O’ Peace Why Thirsty? ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ O’ Peace Why Thirsty? ~

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~ O’ PEACE WHY THIRSTY? ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
24 March 23,2010.

'Give Peace a Chance' – Beatles

O’ Peace why thirsty?
Where you’ll get a drop?

Boozed blottoed in
Narconecrotic Narcissism
Emptied hollowedout the
Compassionate pot.

We’re sooty smutty sot
Help from us e'er not
Everywhere is drought
Hah ha woeful we’re not!

O’ Peace why thirsty?

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 24 May 2010

Niv: I'm 75 years old and have always thirst for peace, sad to say I have never experienced it. We will continue to pray for peace, with your poem maybe it will come. Lynn

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Sreekala Sukumaran 23 May 2010

Enjoyed reading it....Excellent.. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr. V. Chakravorty 21 May 2010

Peace Peace Peace…where it is? Who’ll give? Where to get? From whom we can get? Plagued by these questions since time immemorial…everyone. Poet has analyzed nicely human instinct, ‘Narconecrotic Narcissism’ The basic stigma baffling to quench Thirst of Peace. Stoicness and slumber ‘blotted’ in ‘me’ ‘I’, ‘mine’ ‘myself’ standing like Chinese wall … ‘Hah ha woeful we’re not! ’ hammering conclusion indeed. Thanks for such a cerebrate poem…let us ponder to just expand heart a little broader 10 Dr. V.

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fajjot fajjot 08 May 2010

well written... very good...

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May Witwit 06 May 2010

O’ Peace why thirsty? Peace is always thirsty in this villain world. Good write.

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Ken E Hall 12 December 2010

The only peace we get today is peices of bombs to feed the thirst of suicide mentors, thankyou John for 'imagine' Thanyou Niv for the notice..10/10

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Ken E Hall 12 December 2010

The only peace we get today is peices of bombs to feed the thirst of suicide mentors, thankyou John for 'imagine' Thanyou Niv for the notice..10/10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 June 2010

reminds me of a classical poet... sobresaliente! excellent!

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Hon’ble Sr. Poet Sir [Lynn Glover] Indeed I’m touched by your comment…and I’m less than half of your age and becoming apprehensive what next for us…? As world becoming more hedonistic and narcissist… Yes Sir I admit Prayers and sincere Prayers for our psychic sanitization is required…and it requires rigorous discipline [may be religious or self value oriented discipline] aiming at to be humane not human what already we’re. Utmost regards niv - Copy to Hon’ble Sr. Poet Sir [Lynn Glover]

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Lynn Glover 24 May 2010

Niv: I'm 75 years old and have always thirst for peace, sad to say I have never experienced it. We will continue to pray for peace, with your poem maybe it will come. Lynn

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