~ O’ Peace Why Thirsty? ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

The last stanza lines read really good...sarcastic humour at its best...thirsty peace in a 'pot' with no 'wet' drops! Well, clever beautiful poetry...10

Agree with Poet Kesav-ji…last line is ‘Sarcastic Humor’… a little to add with humility ‘Sarcastic Hammer’ …if we wake up…from own-created slumber... It is very contemporary poem in this unrest world….where economic…ethnic…religious…etc…are soaring and hitting our civilization… A wake-up call …let not ‘Peace Be Thirsty’ … Excellent easel conceptualization and quote of Beatles is added poetic French fragrance … Enjoyed whole length and thanks … 10++

O’ Peace why thirsty? A tangible question ends this thouight provoking write, Existentialist in flavour in the last stanza, You are telling something to ponder upon. Thanks.10

Food for thought and nice poetic piece

It is generated Thirst …artificially created Thirst …well engineered / programmed Thirst…since dawn [of before] civilization…as we seldom try to travel [read expand] beyond our own ‘wee self’ … I agree with Wee Reader ‘…Everywhere is drought/Hah ha woeful we’re not! ’ It’s a ‘Sarcastic Hammer’ and well posed in comments…and it’s the bottom line and golden key to enter into morale of this poem… Will we? My sincere question/ memo to me too? ? AB 10+++ London

The only peace we get today is peices of bombs to feed the thirst of suicide mentors, thankyou John for 'imagine' Thanyou Niv for the notice..10/10

The only peace we get today is peices of bombs to feed the thirst of suicide mentors, thankyou John for 'imagine' Thanyou Niv for the notice..10/10

reminds me of a classical poet... sobresaliente! excellent!

Hon’ble Sr. Poet Sir [Lynn Glover] Indeed I’m touched by your comment…and I’m less than half of your age and becoming apprehensive what next for us…? As world becoming more hedonistic and narcissist… Yes Sir I admit Prayers and sincere Prayers for our psychic sanitization is required…and it requires rigorous discipline [may be religious or self value oriented discipline] aiming at to be humane not human what already we’re. Utmost regards niv - Copy to Hon’ble Sr. Poet Sir [Lynn Glover]

Niv: I'm 75 years old and have always thirst for peace, sad to say I have never experienced it. We will continue to pray for peace, with your poem maybe it will come. Lynn