O' That One Miracle Might Fall-Pt In A Series Of Poems Leading To My Death Poem by Ted Sheridan

O' That One Miracle Might Fall-Pt In A Series Of Poems Leading To My Death

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There are many coffin shaped clouds in the sky this evening
Sailing the open blue like so many Viking funeral ships
Lit ablaze by the setting sun and leaving trails of cremated remains
For the white gulls on the wing as the fat lady sings sayonara
___I wonder if I might be so lucky as to catch a falling star

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The Viking Goddess did save you finally..

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fanniesson - 30 September 2007

Beyond great one of the best you could ask to read here!

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There are no fat ladies singing around here. And the shining star is you. t x

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Chris Mendros 30 September 2007

Great images here, Ted, and some of your strongest writing to date. Glad i got a chance to catch your rising star here on poemhunter. Let's all pray for a miracle.

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Hubcap Shithead 30 September 2007

the viking godddess of poem hunter ms faslund might just save you in time..

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