O When In Loneliness Think Of Me Poem by me poet yeps poet

O When In Loneliness Think Of Me

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In the loneliness solitude of time
just think of me, as a friend of thine

Poetry
when in loneliness think of me

In the loneliness
solitude of time
just think of me
a friend of thine

upon my shoulders
lay your head and weep
if you wish to instead

and

when your tears flow dry
you will then know
how loneliness too does fly

and
a smile shall come upon your face
as when a lonesome stranger
like me the face you try to trace
in the mirrors of time

and
the shadows of life
whenever you are ever in strife
think about me and my lonely life

I rest upon shoulders still alive
none wants to carry me you bet
there where the end has yet
to me finally lay to rest


Of life
that's all about life I know
I have studied in confidence
over 20000 folks

A certain friend didn't take my advice
and went out in the arms of a stray Internet lover
and I don't know whether
she has lost much yet

she lost her hubby
she lost her two kids to him
she lost her car
she lost a shared laptop
she lost an orchard

and
I now think
there is only one thing left to lose
is her already lost sanity

I'm a friend of the down trodden
but sad no one does listen
till such time
time treads and crushes them

albeit I continue
to perform my solitary advisory duty
the grass is greener
on the far side of the hill

Thursday, February 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: advice,friendship,loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 28 February 2019

A great consolation for the deprived soul in life and a last resort to spend the balance of life! A magnanimous heart only a poet like this poet has perhaps in the world!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 February 2019

A well crafted poem......10++++++++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

o' nothing I know, it's not will-o-the-wisp of beauty, not the Newton's Apple tree, not the Buddha tree, EUREKA! EUREKA! EUREKA! screaming out I'm in lonely but not in crazy I find my darling beauty in my solitary her name is - POETRY its my

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 February 2019

beautiful poetic expression //// here I've come jobless stranger as an alone wanderer no darling here is no confidante here is no flower here is no garden of making love here is lonely I'm then the POET an entity from the primitive sense calls me in whispering intuition subconsciously I'm there is find nothing without myself, illusion! oversight on my sense! is it aberration? (cont..)

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M Asim Nehal 28 February 2019

Never lose your hope and keep going, no matter what other feels, you are alone like a tiger, in jungle Like eagle flying high alone. Keep going, Congrats for 1000 poems Many more to follow i hope.

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