Obey God's Command Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Obey God's Command

Rating: 5.0


J-ust after the rain has gone,
E-vening shadows fade away;
S-un slowly starts rising,
T-hird month fifth day.
O-ne early morn has broken,
N-ew dawn ousts the twilight;
I-nclement weather drifts into the deep dark of night.

D-ue to clear wide sky
E-very place is in good view;
L-et the bright crimson lights
O-ver the clouds
S-hine on you.

S-ee the things invisible,
A-im at what lies ahead;
N-o more cry and pain,
T-ears are wiped away instead.
O-nly the chosen ones shall inherit the promised land;
S-alvation is reserved for those who obey God's command.

Friday, March 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Tutaan 25 January 2019

S-alvation is reserved for those who obey God's command. A prizewinning line, dear Bernard................

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Cheryl Tutaan 26 December 2018

Such an inspiring acrostic, Bernard.............10+++++++++++++++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 March 2016

Beautifully envisioned inspirational prayer of the God that highlights the fruits of obeying the commandments of the God. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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