Obsession With Cheese Poem by Marina Zerdali

Obsession With Cheese

Rating: 5.0


There were once two bees
their only wish to eat cheese
Flying from frlowers to trees
looking for that magic chesse

One day with sun and a light warm breeze
came to the forest a mouse, japannese
he had a silver bag full of sweet cheese
the smell of which made the two bees to freeze

The bees with a smart plan to analyze
found a way to steel the japannese cheese
with joy and tears they eat it with a huge bite.
Before the sun went down, the bees
who ate the cheese
became ill, sad with a disease

They were ready to die
till the compassionate mouse
saved their life with the best remedy
It was not cheese, neither money
just a drop of goldie honey

''The cheese is my remedy
follow the nature for life to be
sunny like honey''
said the mouse
and away did it flee.

Sunday, November 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: animals,fun,lessons of life,metaphor,nature,story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 07 November 2021

Another piece of fictional poetry. Loved the style of storytelling. Great. Keep it up.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 23 February 2018

That s awesome imagination. Brilliant scripting. Thanks for sharing

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Garima 11 December 2017

What a great poetry

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Rajnish Manga 11 December 2017

Quite an interesting poem with a gripping narrative. It's sweet like a nursery rhyme. Thank you, Marina.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

The bees with a smart plan to analyze found a way to steel. For joy and honey they started working. You observed and expressed well in brilliant poem...10

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