All Under A Sky Of Stars Poem by Marina Zerdali

All Under A Sky Of Stars

Rating: 5.0


Stading under the sky
into night's hug
watching the twinkling lights
The wind plays with her fairy hair
and the moon her face illuminates
There is sadness in her eyes
There lies a story, her story

Once a upon a time
a man of extraordinary beauty
entered her ordinary life
A man with emeralds as eyes
and night as hair
Her heart was captivated
by his dreamy words
about stars and constellations
moons planets and nebulae
For the galaxies he knew so much
for life nothing
As a child was his behavior
but his heart older than universe
together time was a poetic verse
The most human of all but he was something else
A traveler, an artist, an Alien
He was an Allien
She was a Human
The tale ended
without happy endings

Standing under the sky
into night's hug
between the twinkling stars
The winds play with his astral hair
and the moon his face illuminate
There is sadness in his eyes
there lies a story, his story

He loved a special girl
He loved a human girl
Her destiny was something else
she needed the pain to stay true to herself
to walk at the end of her tale

But his soul desires hers
his heart for ever is hers
What a sad tale is their love story
But ours is sadder
We never find our true alien
and they never find the way home
In a world without love
earth is so thirsty of true love

I am standing under the sky
into night's hug
in front of the twinkling stars
The wind plays with my pure hair
and the moon my fase illuminates
There is serenity in my eyes
there lies hope, there lies my fairy-tale

''under a sky of stars''

All Under A Sky Of Stars
Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love,nature,universe
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was watching the stars and an image came to my mind. An image of a girl in love with an alien but then i thought is love real? Why our heart desires a special love? Then an other inner voice, the dissapointed one was talking about the fact that there is no real love today. no when i see around me so many shattered families. Of course i don't want to bellieve that. that's why i wrote this poem.a poem as a reaction to my dissapointed voice. I bellieve in true love even in dark eras. There will always be under the stars hearts full of true love, souls that one day will be toghether.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Love with twinkle stars is wonderfully felt standing under this beautiful sky. Very well penned poem this is...10

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Marin Asteropeitria 25 November 2017

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul! ! ! Every comment that comes from my poetry siblings makes me happy and gives me the strenth to continue! ! !

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Dawn Novus 24 November 2017

There lies hope, there lies my fairy tale... Exquisitely penned poet. Cant wait to read more from you...You may re-write the ending so the Alien and the Girl end up together forever..stranger things have happened..

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Marin Asteropeitria 25 November 2017

My Dear Loza if i could give you a present to thank you for your beautiful words i would give you a star! ! Realy! ! ! Thank you so much for the advise too! ! ! Maybe in another poem the alien finds the girl and be together! ! ! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 November 2017

Such an inspiring write, Marina....

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 November 2021

Marvellous poem. Beautifully written, captivating. The melancholy feeling permeates to the hearts of the reader.

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Steve W 11 December 2017

Beautiful picture.......................

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James Mclain 11 December 2017

Congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 December 2017

As a child was his behavior but his heart older than universe together time was a poetic verse The most human of all but he was something else A traveler, an artist, an Alien A great poem narrating romance between alien beings and residents but not hearts...it captures the mind of any reader instantly. Thanks for the notes too. 10+++++ Congrats Marina for the poem being picked today, as POD. Subhas

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 December 2017

Muse, fuse! Under the sky! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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