Och Aye...But No! Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Och Aye...But No!

Rating: 5.0


Mention (in passing)
that I like tartan

& now
here you are

in a tiny tartan tank top
in a tiny tartan mini-skirt

matching tartan
(of course…of course)
bra & knickers

and underneath it all
(surprise…surprise)
tartan tit tassels.

I am...overwhelmed.

You look so
cute but

a bit
(over the top)
heavy on the overkill.

I remove each
tartan item

(delicately)

one
by
one.

Such
fun!

Tell you
I love you

just

as you
are.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Dee Wright 27 January 2008

Ahhh...but doncha just lovet the wee lassie for trying! Over the top but then you have the pleasure of taking off the top and the other delicious 'tartan items! ' Reducing her down to the lovely self you love her for. Didn't ya tell me that the next day you went out and got a kilt which she then delighted in and wouldn't let you take it off('cos she said it wasn't necessary) ! So dressing up and undresssing the dresssing can be a lot....of fun! So come on...write that poem as a follow up to this one and give us one of your sequence poems. And surely MIND ON OTHER THINGS is the bookend of this...is it not! Great Scot...it will be a hoot mon! Ahh...go on...go on go on! Ah ya will ya will ya will! Oh I love a lassie a lovely lovely lasssie...oh stop yer tickling Jock ya make me tear ma frock. I also like the rhymed couplet comment below! love Debbie the Debs

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Gina Pisapia 27 January 2008

Och aye but yes! Another hit on the miss in skirt. Seems like a companion piece to ON OTHER THINGS. Tender and funny all at the same time. You make loving...fun! love GinaXXX

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Danny Reynolds 26 January 2008

Though their occurences may appear Spartan, ye canny beat a guid tart in Tartan. Danny; ¬)

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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