Ode On Love And Hate Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Ode On Love And Hate

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O thou life's twain called love and hate,
What if I see you separate?
Love would be prime— no predicate,
Under the garb of love can hide no hate.

Yet, equal world worships both you,
Favoured nor frowned, eyes royal blue,
I've seen both wear a varied hue,
But world's nothing if not of dual view.

For, a day spared is, love to cheer,
Hate has widest field as its sphere,
Feeling free to hawk round the year,
If love is, hate seems no less to world dear.

And O Love, a poor prostitute,
In wedding garments looking cute,
Exploited when ye trade its fruit,
Thine esteem raped, ye keep will's voice on mute.

If love's graceful erotic art,
Emanating from human heart,
So is hate a product of heart,
But art there's not even of hundredth part.

Emotions of volcanic scale,
Love-hate— one's cyclone, the ‘ther gale,
Spontaneous to hate or hail,
And life is either heaven, or else hell.

By stroke of fate may man rule world,
Or hated not here-to-fore heard,
To heal hearts try ever onward,
But cure may come or not, a whimsy bird.

Should hate widen gulfs of distance,
Should hearts cause it more to enhance,
Love fills up the space-time at once,
O Love, O Hate, thine seems a quirky dance!

Love's born if of faith, so is hate,
Love lives on hope; hate's no such fate,
Lacking trust, hate enters rear gate,
Ye both still suffer an uncertain state.

Siamese twins, O love and hate,
One leaves to let-in bosom-mate,
One dies its twain rules human fate,
The trick is to stretch love's expiry date!

And if there be life without love,
Life without hate whatso won't move,
Life's fulcrum, thou art central groove,
Man's very existence ye tend to prove.

And two sides of a coin the same,
Differing only in the name,
Man likes love and hates hate, poor dame!
Should one die, the other feels shorn of aim.

And yet, the day love's drained of hate,
Purest, it now reaches the highest state.
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Ode | 08.12.2017 |

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hate,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 24 February 2019

Outstanding poem, As Dr. Dillip said this is one of the most difficult forms of poetry but you did full justice to it. I quote my pick from your poem: Awesome 10+++ Love's born if of faith, so is hate, Love lives on hope; hate's no such fate, Lacking trust, hate enters rear gate, Ye both still suffer an uncertain state.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

It takes a lot of time, such poems. But when you receive such encouraging feedback, you feel the labour was well invested. Thank you indeed, Mohammad Nehal.

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Savita Tyagi 21 February 2019

Amazing! A poem of super excellence. Love and hate both part of life, have their own expiration date. One’s presence we enjoy other’s need to be abhore and endured. Loved the last verse. Thank you for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

I always look forward to feedback from some poets like you, and when they come a day is done as if. Thank you so much Savita Tyagi.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2019

Ode is one of the most difficult forms of poetry though I love this form! This is a unique Ode on hate and love so beautifully composed! ! The last two lines are my favorite lines: " And yet, the day love's drained of hate/Purest, it now reaches the highest state" .....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

Thank you Dr Swain, you may if you wish visit some of my odes, and give your valuable feedback.

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