C.J. Heck

Rookie - 255 Points (August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida)

Ode To Being Five (Children) - Poem by C.J. Heck

I made a paper Valentine
all red and edged with lace.
And on my paper Valentine,
I drew a pretty face.

I painted on two big blue eyes
and then a great big grin
and knew it wouldn't be complete
without a dimpled chin.

I love you, paper valentine,
and just between us two,
I hope someday when I grow up
I'll look as sweet as you.


Comments about Ode To Being Five (Children) by C.J. Heck

  • (4/29/2006 10:11:00 PM)


    one of the sweetest poems i have read in a while.

    warm regards, ~dana~
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  • (12/6/2005 2:01:00 AM)


    This poem is so darn sweet I think I got a cavity just reading it!

    lol

    Love your work. Keep 'em coming.

    S
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  • (2/14/2005 3:11:00 PM)


    The children of the world will love this poem CJ WELL DONE


    Warm regards
    AJS
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  • (2/14/2005 8:52:00 AM)


    This is delightful!
    Chrissie
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  • (2/14/2005 6:34:00 AM)


    I love your poet's valentine -
    and just between us two,
    I hope to you, it looks like me;
    to me, it looks like you...
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  • (2/14/2005 6:34:00 AM)


    CJ,
    I wish I had your feel for the innocence of a child
    Rusty
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 14, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 13, 2005


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