Ode To My Love Poem by Dr. M. Asim Nehal

Ode To My Love

Rating: 5.0


On the full moon night when the tide rises
And they follow one after another
I feel something in my heart
And my cheek feels million kisses.

I see my dreams rushing towards me
But I have just one lifetime to realise
Where do I keep them, how do I enjoy?
I would choose to be with you all life.

When our eyes are together
And hand in hand, the smile travel miles
I feel love vibrant and touching
And glow on your face.

Though our soul dwells in two bodies
And Heart resides in two parts
We live in each other's sorrow and happiness
We are inseparable, like water and the fish.

Tuesday, April 20, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: ode,cute love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 21 April 2021

Like water and the fish... Brilliant

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Varsha M 21 April 2021

Sir this is a very beautiful ode. So welll captured the emotions in words. The closing like inseperable like water and fish is magnificent. It reminds me of children poem machli jal ki rani hai..jeevan uska paani hai....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 April 2021

A fabulous ode to love... captivating poetic expression... appreciated.5 stars

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Sunprincess* 21 April 2021

Excellent ode to your love.

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Suzon Albert 24 April 2021

To my favourite list. Such a soothing poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 April 2021

Though our soul dwells in two bodies And Heart resides in two parts We live in each other's sorrow and happiness We are inseparable, like water and the fish. Superb Verse! Top stars for sure.

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Deepak S S 22 April 2021

Enjoyable ode to your love. I admire your love poems. Truly fabulous.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 21 April 2021

Perfect ode to your love. Great metaphor and similes.

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Sunprincess* 21 April 2021

Marvellous poem.

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