Ode To My Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Ode To My Love
On the full moon night when the tide rises
And they follow one after another
I feel something in my heart
And my cheek feels million kisses.
I see my dreams rushing towards me
But I have just one lifetime to realise
Where do I keep them, how do I enjoy?
I would choose to be with you all life.
When our eyes are together
And hand in hand, the smile travel miles
I feel love vibrant and touching
And glow on your face.
Though our soul dwells in two bodies
And Heart resides in two parts
We live in each other's sorrow and happiness
We are inseparable, like water and the fish.
Sir this is a very beautiful ode. So welll captured the emotions in words. The closing like inseperable like water and fish is magnificent. It reminds me of children poem machli jal ki rani hai..jeevan uska paani hai....
A fabulous ode to love... captivating poetic expression... appreciated.5 stars
Though our soul dwells in two bodies And Heart resides in two parts We live in each other's sorrow and happiness We are inseparable, like water and the fish. Superb Verse! Top stars for sure.
Enjoyable ode to your love. I admire your love poems. Truly fabulous.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Like water and the fish... Brilliant