Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Of My Valentine Flower - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Those rosy petals
Fresh an’ fragrant once
Of my valentine flower
Now look withered;
I keep them upon
The platter of my heart
My cherished treasure;
The feelings of love
The wind water and the fire
That associated with,
Whither would they leave?
Beyond these four walls,
Where they reverberate?
My dear, you reside there
Forever reared
In my memories revere

12th February 2010


Comments about Of My Valentine Flower by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (5/17/2010 5:20:00 PM)


    A really nice poem, love is amazing and the way you express it is amazing, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • (3/14/2010 3:43:00 PM)


    Nice flow
    nice blending words
    10s
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  • (2/23/2010 4:35:00 AM)


    Lovely Kesavji... Truly well written simple but rich piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • (2/23/2010 4:08:00 AM)


    Delicately tender, this Valentine flower. (Report) Reply

  • (2/21/2010 1:27:00 AM)


    Deathless entity of 'Perfect Love'...I'll not add the cliched say why only V Day [just 1 day] for Love...

    Its a relentless flow of Bliss without greed of Hiss...wat in vogue today...

    Perfect Ten [PT] Love is rare and scare...

    And you've sculpted that PT

    10 from feelings

    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (2/20/2010 12:33:00 AM)


    Deeply touching, this poem reverberates with the memories of not so long ago enveloping the present with desire that froths like the foam of the waves from the sea. Your poetic touch to the thoughts of many brings you to the fore as one of the finest on this the site. May god be with you in all that you endeavour.....Mandara (Report) Reply

  • (2/18/2010 3:23:00 AM)


    One's emotions of love are not confined to any particular day, a flower given by the loved one, remains precious, regardless of which day of the year it was received. The essance of this beautiful write goes beyond time and space, reflect your deep thoughts and proves your skill, a lovely poem and with substance and meaning!
    regards
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  • (2/16/2010 7:03:00 PM)


    A lovely poem with reverence for the loved one
    My dear you residether
    Forever, reared
    in my memories revere

    memories last longer than life and continue to replenish our spirit.you have treated the subject with so much gentleness and delicacy.

    10

    Mamta
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (2/16/2010 2:00:00 AM)


    True to a loved one, that reside in your heart forever.10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/15/2010 7:06:00 PM)


    Indeed beautiful... wonderful expressions of love... a touching write. Excellent as usual. (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (2/15/2010 12:57:00 AM)


    Simple...yet with contentful depth...beautifully presented....a memorable valentine flower....thank you (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2010 9:42:00 PM)


    A LOVELY VALENTINE POEM...IT REVERBERATES LOVE (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2010 7:47:00 AM)


    Very nice. Each line is moving, moved my deep.10. (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2010 10:38:00 AM)


    Its such a beautiful poem sir.....so touching! :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 12, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, April 30, 2010


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