These rosy petals,
fresh and fragrant once,
of my Valentine's flower
now look withered
I keep them upon
the platter of my heart-
my cherished treasure-
the feelings of love,
the wind, water, and the fire
associated with them,
whither would they leave?
beyond these four walls,
where they reverberate-
My dear, you reside there
forever reared
in my memories revere
12th February 2010
Simple...yet with contentful depth...beautifully presented....a memorable valentine flower....thank you
Indeed beautiful... wonderful expressions of love... a touching write. Excellent as usual.
A really nice poem, love is amazing and the way you express it is amazing, thanks for sharing
Lovely Kesavji... Truly well written simple but rich piece of work.
Deathless entity of 'Perfect Love'...I'll not add the cliched say why only V Day [just 1 day] for Love... Its a relentless flow of Bliss without greed of Hiss...wat in vogue today... Perfect Ten [PT] Love is rare and scare... And you've sculpted that PT 10 from feelings Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Its such a beautiful poem sir.....so touching! :)