The monkey stared hard at me;
Imitating him I was?
It was clear his birth right;
Who I thought I was?
I could feel a bit ashamed;
How would I answer back?
Outside he was watching from;
It was me behind bars...
May 2nd 2009
yes. i agree. fantastic write. short but much thoughts embedded.
deep and meaningful poem.
This is poem sublimest, Kesav Sir! A thought-provoking poem with a deep philosophy humorous, bit ironical, but very cleverly written To MyPoemsList.
A thoughtful metaphor, an intelligent write.
A wonderful observation! A beautiful poem with fabulous imagery................10
Yes indeed. Thank you Dillip
A poem of great depth. It invokes thoughts to ponder about. Cleverly written.
We think we humans are superior to every other being in this universe. How come this? Think how a virus works, for that matter. Thanks for your analytical feedback Rose Marie. Liked
I love this poem. The tables were turned and guess who was behind bars and who was imitating who? Wonderful. Maybe the monkey will have the last laugh on us humans too?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
A very good and thought provoking write once again! liked it...