The monkey stared hard at me;
Imitating him I was?
It was clear his birth right;
Who I thought I was?
I could feel a bit ashamed;
How would I answer back?
Outside he was watching from;
It was me behind bars...
May 2nd 2009
nicely put up....i get a sense of reflection in this poem....nice....kind of water like feeling.....awesome...
yes you should be put behind the bars for this sarcastic one boss...hahaha....well written
This is poem sublimest, Kesav Sir! A thought-provoking poem with a deep philosophy humorous, bit ironical, but very cleverly written To MyPoemsList.
A wonderful observation! A beautiful poem with fabulous imagery................10
A poem of great depth. It invokes thoughts to ponder about. Cleverly written.
We think we humans are superior to every other being in this universe. How come this? Think how a virus works, for that matter. Thanks for your analytical feedback Rose Marie. Liked
I love this poem. The tables were turned and guess who was behind bars and who was imitating who? Wonderful. Maybe the monkey will have the last laugh on us humans too?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
absolutely amazing to c life from from the others view..... truly then only we realize what we think is right is actually not right fr all...