Of Perfect People & Judgements Rendered Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Of Perfect People & Judgements Rendered

Rating: 5.0


Old habits die hard for some...
Breaching bonds once made
Loosing the lush green of goodness and joy
Watching over years as their landscape begins to fade.

SO many - too many - involved
Enter: me and my unbelieving mind
Could not wrap myself 'round the notion...
That humans could be so devious & unkind.

It seems a group of 'perfect' judges formed
With plans based on total hearsay...
Psychic's Ghost Busters & the Motley Crew
That began it's rule down 'round Florida way.

Australia, Texas and Washington state joined in
The malice - it cut like a knife...
Nearly slicing my heart into pieces
Devastating what's left of my life.


By, Theodora Onken

April 25, 2016

Monday, April 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bullying,judgement,wrong vs. right
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The story of my life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 21 May 2016

I don't really understand all of this, but I understand and feel the emotion expressed within this writing. It seems you are now on a better path with better people around you. I don't really know you, but I get that sense. When old bonds are breached and unfair judgments are rendered, there is allot of pain with that. Theme aside, the way in which you wrote this is fun and expressive. I like the lines, Psychic's Ghost Busters & the Motley Crew That began it's rule down 'round Florida way. Take care!

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Theodora Onken 27 April 2016

This is a true story...the likes of which i would not wish on my worst enemy. Having lived this nightmare-it has made me wiser and stronger. Am no longer naive and now trust all of my gut instincts.

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