Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Off My Best List - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

If you want to stay on my back like that,
You'll be...
A lover gone.
And if you want to nit-pick with nonstop chat,
You'll be...
A lover gone.
You'll be,
A lover checked off my best list.

And if you want to nit-pick with nonstop chat,
You'll be...
A lover gone.
With a staying on my back to nag like that,
You'll be...
A lover gone.
You'll be...
A lover checked off my best list.
Without a doubt.
You'll be...
A lover checked off my best list.

And if you want to stay on my back like that,
You'll be...
A lover gone.
You'll be...
A lover without a nest.
You''ll be...
A lover who gets no rest.
You'll be...
A lover checked off my best list.
Without a doubt.
You'll be...
A lover checked off my best list.
And with a shut mouth...
You're off my best list.


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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 3, 2013



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