Oh How Crazy I Am In Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Oh How Crazy I Am In Love

Rating: 5.0


With the same old familiar touch,
with your hand in my hand,
walk with me for the last time.
Oh how crazy I am in love!

I am lying on a bed at his shoulders,
and it's not a bed of roses.
Still dreaming a touch!
Oh how crazy I am in love!

He is leaving me alone,
deceiving me for the last time.
Still dreaming a kiss!
Oh how crazy I am in love!

But he is my love,
before leaving and deceiving me
he removed the veil from my cold face
and kissed my forehead!

Oh how lazy he is in love!
Oh how crazy I am in love!

Oh How Crazy I Am In Love
Sunday, April 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,parting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 09 April 2018

he removed the veil from my cold face- I like this metaphor- beautiful love poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2018

Another timeless piece. So poignant and touching. A powerful, gripping and vivid portrayal of an eternal love. Amazing piece worth to be read again.10 and into my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 April 2018

Oh how crazy I am in love! This is another lovely piece of work an extended version of your top poem which I feel reading time and again! Thanks for sharing dear sir!

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Khalida Bano Ali 08 April 2018

What a sad but touching poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2018

Love improves the craziness and still emotional touch is felt by every word. But time has different command on life. Death brings agony and sorrow. Departing from own beloved person is painful. This poem carries lover and emotion and this is excellently penned...10

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