Kumarmani Mahakul

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Oh Monsoon You Rain - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Why are you having less rain?
This gives farmers sure pain
How crops will be grown tell?
Oh monsoon water drops bell.

If you will rain wise is nice,
We shall adore you sky thrice.
Slice of food all should get
Correctly wisdom soon you set.

Without water how can we stay,
You come cloudy but rain in day
We say each other we do worry
Come on monsoon come in hurry.

We promise sure to grow forest
Without rain life is in sorest.
Hope you will feel our request,
You will come soon from west.

Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle, rain, life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is based on thought of monsoon and rain. Due to slow movement of monsoon we get less rain and farmers become worried. In this case poet requests monsoon to come and rain properly so we can get water sufficiently for living and cropping. Without water life can never sustain. This is the them, e of this poem. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and d dedicated to the people of the world.

Comments about Oh Monsoon You Rain by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Pushpendra Patel (3/5/2019 2:56:00 AM)

    I rainy season we see monsoon comes and does rain. This is an interesting poem shared here. (Report)Reply

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  • Terry CraddockTerry Craddock (11/20/2015 3:54:00 AM)

    If I ever get to India I would like to sit in the Monsoon for awhile to drink in the experience, as I again live on the coast below mountains with the Tasman Sea facing us and rain often crossing the Pacific or coming up from the Antarctic we do not experience drought or very rarely and briefly, but rain is magical here at night on the iron roofs of so many kiwi houses in this town. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (10/9/2015 5:43:00 AM)

    Importance of rains in countries where irrigation mostly depends on rains has been nicely painted. (Report)Reply

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  • Jayatissa K. LiyanageJayatissa K. Liyanage (9/28/2015 1:08:00 AM)

    A heartfelt thinking of an emotional character. (Report)Reply

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  • Sanjukta NagSanjukta Nag (9/28/2015 12:48:00 AM)

    A heart touching invokation towards monsoon. many thanks..10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 27, 2015



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