Oh My Dadi(Grandma) Poem by DEEPANSHU MALIK

Oh My Dadi(Grandma)



It feels like everything is finished,
you were the only one who completes my family,

I missed those golden times,
Now its difficult to survive,

I'm missing all your interruption and advice,
I'm missing all your stories which I got used to before sleeping,

All happiness of my world is gone,
Now its hard to find them,

Now you are gone and the only thing I'm doing is scolding the God,

Tears stream down my face,
When I see the photographs and videos of yours,

Its impossible to live,
Oh please come back dadi,

I wake up somewhere in between when I was sleeping,
Because your cute face comes in front of my eyes,

Then I open my eyes,
And your absence makes my heart fall apart,

everything was going good then that day come,
Your death was scariest moment of my life,

I don't wanted to lose you,
I wanted you to live with me more,

Now I understand that God does not exist,
If they exist, they never took you away from me,

If I could turn back time to the good times,
So that I would spend more time with you,

God why do you do this to me,
You have no idea how much I attached with my dadi?

love you dadi and i will always love you,

Oh My Dadi(Grandma)
Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: family life,lament,memories,missing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is all about my grandma(dadi) , i was very attached to her, now she is no more that's why i write this, because writing is healing, love you dadi and i will always love you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 09 April 2016

I agree with Kelly Kurt. À suggestion....Use apostrophe to form the contraction of it is, like you did with i am. Thanks for sharing. Bri ☺

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2016

I missed those golden times! But, there is still hope ahead of you. Nice work.

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Deepanshu Malik 25 March 2016

thanks for the suggestion sir

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Kelly Kurt 24 March 2016

I am sorry for your loss, Deepanshu. Yes, writing is good therapy and you have expressed your love and sorrow very nicely here. There are some rough parts with your English, but all in all a well written, emotional poem. Keep writing. Peace

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Deepanshu Malik 25 March 2016

thanks sir for the suggestion, I am improving my English.

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