How Can I Move On Poem by DEEPANSHU MALIK

How Can I Move On

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GOING BACK TO THAT PLACE WHERE WE SPENT MOST OF THE TIME
THINKING MAY BE YOU'LL COME BACK WHERE WE'D MET
I KNOW THIS POEM MAKES NO SENSE BUT WHAT ELSE CAN I DO?
MY FRIENDS SUGGEST ME TO MOVE ON BUT HOW CAN I DO THIS WHEN
I STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU
CAUSE EVERYDAY I WAKE UP AND FIND THAT I MISSING YOU
CAUSE EVERYDAY I WAKE UP AND FIND SOME TEARS IN MY EYES
I REMEMBER THE DAY WHEN YOU TOLD ME TO GET LOST FROM MY LIFE
I WISHED THAT I COULD WAKE FROM BAD DREAM
AND FORGET ABOUT THESE WORDS WHICH CAME OUT OF YOUR MOUTH

I HOPE YOU READ THIS POEM SOMETIME
I HOPE YOU BELIEVE ME, BE MINE

Wednesday, August 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 22 September 2015

You write with such depth of your feelings and you express yourself with such honesty, I really enjoyed this beautiful write, well done!

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Deepanshu Malik 24 September 2015

thanx hazel for your lovely comment, and thanx for reading my all poems

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Maria Gonzalez 20 September 2015

Very touching Deep...Keep on writing. Writing is healing.

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Deepanshu Malik 21 September 2015

thanx stewart for reading this poem

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Charity Nduhiu 14 September 2015

Deepanshu, take courage Love is like a journey, it has bumps, hills, valleys and even rivers to cross so be prepared to encounter all these and at the end you will get to your destination. Thanks for sharing

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Deepanshu Malik 14 September 2015

thanx sir for reading this poem and for motivation also

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Chinedu Dike 26 August 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly, a voyage of bliss. It is also whimsical and temperamental, coming when it pleases and may leave without warning or notice. It's a beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned from heart albeit a depiction of distress in bliss of love. Thanks for sharing Malik. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Deepanshu Malik 27 August 2015

plz read my new poem'story of my love'

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Deepanshu Malik 27 August 2015

hi chinedu, thanx for the comment, srusly sir u undersrand my feeling

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harsh kalyani 23 August 2015

Nice one bro - really touching

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