GOING BACK TO THAT PLACE WHERE WE SPENT MOST OF THE TIME
THINKING MAY BE YOU'LL COME BACK WHERE WE'D MET
I KNOW THIS POEM MAKES NO SENSE BUT WHAT ELSE CAN I DO?
MY FRIENDS SUGGEST ME TO MOVE ON BUT HOW CAN I DO THIS WHEN
I STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU
CAUSE EVERYDAY I WAKE UP AND FIND THAT I MISSING YOU
CAUSE EVERYDAY I WAKE UP AND FIND SOME TEARS IN MY EYES
I REMEMBER THE DAY WHEN YOU TOLD ME TO GET LOST FROM MY LIFE
I WISHED THAT I COULD WAKE FROM BAD DREAM
AND FORGET ABOUT THESE WORDS WHICH CAME OUT OF YOUR MOUTH
I HOPE YOU READ THIS POEM SOMETIME
I HOPE YOU BELIEVE ME, BE MINE
Very touching Deep...Keep on writing. Writing is healing.
Deepanshu, take courage Love is like a journey, it has bumps, hills, valleys and even rivers to cross so be prepared to encounter all these and at the end you will get to your destination. Thanks for sharing
Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly, a voyage of bliss. It is also whimsical and temperamental, coming when it pleases and may leave without warning or notice. It's a beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned from heart albeit a depiction of distress in bliss of love. Thanks for sharing Malik. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
hi chinedu, thanx for the comment, srusly sir u undersrand my feeling
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You write with such depth of your feelings and you express yourself with such honesty, I really enjoyed this beautiful write, well done!
thanx hazel for your lovely comment, and thanx for reading my all poems