DEEPANSHU MALIK


Story Of My Love - Poem by DEEPANSHU MALIK

HER NAME IS_______
I SEE HER TWO FACES,
FIRST WAS WHEN SHE WAS MY CLOSEST FRIEND AND
SECOND WAS WHEN SHE TURNED INTO A STRANGER WHEN I PROPOSED HER
EVERYTIME I TOLD HER HOW I FEEL
BUT SHE SAYS IT'S NOT REAL
I'VE CRIED SO MANY TEARS FOR WRITING THIS POEM
I WROTE THIS POEM FOR HER TO SEE
SO THAT SHE UNDERSTAND HOW I FEEL
NOW SHE WAS GONE AND I'VE LOST
WHO I AM, I CAN'T UNDERSTAND?
I DELETED ALL HER PICTURES WHICH WERE IN MY PHONE
BUT HOW CAN I DELETE THOSE PICTURES WHICH IS IN MY SOUL?
IN THE STARTING OF OUR FRIENDSHIP IT SEEMED SO BRIGHT
BUT THING TURNED OUT SO UNPREDICATBLE AND I'M STILL SURPRISED
IT'S DIFFICULT TO DEAL WITH THE PAIN OF LOSING HER
BUT WHAT ELSE CAN I DO
THEIR IS SOME HOPE IN MY HEART THAT SHE WILL CALL ME ONE DAY
NOW SHE DOESN'T KNOW WHERE I AM
AND SHE DOESN'T GIVE A DAMN ABOUT ME

Topic(s) of this poem: break up, heartbroken, lament, love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Story Of My Love by DEEPANSHU MALIK

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/24/2016 3:46:00 PM)


    My closed friend! We all need one; however, life is also with love and pain. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Deepanshu Malik (3/25/2016 1:07:00 AM)

    yes you are right we all need one,

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  • (1/3/2016 11:14:00 AM)


    Smile in you face, all the time they want to take your place. Powerful writing. (Report) Reply

    Deepanshu Malik (1/4/2016 10:37:00 AM)

    thanx savage for reading this poem

  • Hazel Durham (9/22/2015 7:37:00 AM)


    Bursting with pain and sadness that explodes on the page with your raw passion that is so touching and beautiful to read.
    Well done, I really enjoyed this beautiful write!
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    Deepanshu Malik (9/24/2015 9:57:00 AM)

    thanx hazel for reading this poem

  • (9/20/2015 1:34:00 PM)


    This is very sad.....

    In situations like this, it is better not to chase, but to pull. Become very attractive in your personality and accomplishments. Then just like a light and you will attract the moth you always wanted and several moths more during.
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    Deepanshu Malik (9/24/2015 9:56:00 AM)

    thanx for suggestion tanya, i will follow your suggestion

  • Charity Nduhiu (9/14/2015 3:13:00 AM)


    I am so sorry for you because there is nothing so sad like losing a loved one but there's more pretty fish in the sea. Nice write (Report) Reply

    Deepanshu Malik (9/14/2015 9:17:00 AM)

    thanq nduhiu

  • Kelly Kurt (8/27/2015 4:02:00 PM)


    A sad tale, Deepanshu. I wish you peace (Report) Reply

    Deepanshu Malik (8/31/2015 9:18:00 AM)

    thanx sir for reading this.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, September 4, 2015


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