Layer me on your lips oh dear! I vow
I will be the tang of your daily prayers
Wear me in your blue eyes, oh my love!
I will bear your tears and fears for ever
Emboss me over your bosom oh my dearest
I remain engrossed in the peals of impulses
Your heart spills out, in a swap incessant
Of your love and lovely anger, as lilts melodious
But this is not adequate oh sweetheart
To saturate our ever pining hearts
Let us egress from this earthly smugness
Of skin deep fulfillment, and interlace
Into one whole of eternal coalescence
And let the whole universe around us
Slowly melt down into nothingness
when you become I and I you And the whole universe around us Slowly melts down into nothingness A very romantic poem Sathya....lovely write 10
sathya sir.....very romantic and passionate.....a great pleasure to read this one..10
Wowww.. How wonderful is to read this poem sir.. Very romantic indeed.. I love reading these kind of poems..Not only does this poem reflect your poetic expertise, but also shows that you are man with a great heart..This seems to have come from the core of your heart.. regards Shan
'And let the whole universe around us Slowly melt down into nothingness' Excellent! ! excellent! ! lovers are almost insane in their 'togetherness'
Enthralling piece Sathya....romantic, original and exudes a sense of continuity...all packed in beautiful stanzas...Undoubtedly a 10++++
excellent poem, this kind of eternity is highly and very original suggested............10++++++++++
love devotional...the first stanza lines i most liked...more sentiments sweetness i find there...10
So sweet...thoughts are so heart-warming Words are breathtakingly romantic flowing with the beauty of your words and an expression of great love and adoration... an assurance of lifetime commitment... romantic and with passion... a little bit sensual... a poems that speaks of a versatile You... thanks for sharing this superb write, Sir 10++++++ Lovelots, Maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
when you become I and I you WONDER IF IT WOULD BE BETTER WITHOUT THESE WORDS...