Oh My Love-2 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Oh My Love-2

Rating: 5.0


Deep down the lake of your lover's tears
You sleep motionless
Like a soap bubble yet to be touched.
I love you, So I don't touch..
But simply keep counting
The minutes, and
The beats of my heart.

Monday, May 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Divinity of love is overt, cheers well penned

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Priya 24 October 2018

I wish a fairy mischievous than me could touch the bubble, so that the love could be all around thee.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 24 November 2017

Deep down the lake of your lover's tears You sleep motionless Like a soap bubble yet to be touched. I love you, So I don't touch.. But simply keep counting The minutes, and The beats of my heart. Thanks for shared 10+++++

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Sabita Sahoo 11 June 2016

Like a soap bubble yet to be touched. I love you, So I don't touch.. But simply keep counting The minutes, and The beats of my heart. It's a lovely poem with beautiful concept.

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Anita Aparajita Das 29 May 2016

Deep down the lake of your lover's tears You sleep motionless Like a soap bubble yet to be touched. I love you, So I don't touch.. But simply keep counting Enjoyed this small yet beautiful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Yet to be touched! ! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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