Oh My Pretty One! (For My Dad) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Oh My Pretty One! (For My Dad)

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He remembers her
a little girl

changing her
(she changing him)

her first steps
to him

unsure
but certain

her laughter
(his crying)

tears
(the sheer pleasure of her)

all she had to do
was exist

to be his happiness.

He remembers
her little kiss

the tiny hand upon his face

remembers all
the people
she has ever been

his growing daughter
child to teenager

the young woman
she was becoming

dead
at 18.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 11 April 2008

Changing her...changing him...how very perfect a description of fatherhood...we change their bodies...but not nearly as much as they change us...our very lives! ! Donall, dearest, this is one of the best ever. LYN

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Dee Dee Wright 11 April 2008

Oh this is just too sad...I can't put into words how it makes me feel...knowing how you feel about your Dad and sister. I'll have to stop now...sorry. love Debbie

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Onelia Avelar 11 April 2008

ohh, nooo, this makes me cry and it starts so innocently and ends so bitterly, inexpected painful end of this beautiful poem

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Flora Gillingham 10 April 2008

Wow! I don't know what to say - just read Dee's wonderful celebration. Halts me dead.... F

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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