Old Age. Poem by Nabakishore Dash

Old Age.

Rating: 5.0


Birth, growth, youth, senescence and death are cyclical in
every life span.
What happens after death
is full of strife, remains still unknown.

Forces man to use four eyes,
three legs and two minds.
Strength of all systems
and their speed lag behind.

The vertex becomes bald,
bright sun rays make it dazzle.
The hairs become silver,
teeth fall down,
the person mumbles.

Shiny lacquer of skin is lost,
filled with wrinkles all over.
Joints swell, pain is more,
going up and down the stairs
needs a helper and banister.

The heart has man-made valves,
the vessels have stents.
Knees are replaced, gait abnormal
spine is bent.

Bosoms undergo ptosis,
lose their beauty,
become saggy.
Despite those cosmetic changes,
old people are repertory of
experience and great savvy.

Senile dementia is a problem
in the evening of life of many.
Although not brawny,
struggle through
peaks and valleys of life
makes them pragmatic and brainy.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Old, brawny, pragmatic, brainy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2022

2) and still live healthy and painless lives, but we can only count so many fingers that we have, conclusion: not much of course. This poem is a look into the geriatrician's waiting room, brilliantly desribed 5 Stars full on Top, Dr. Dash

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 February 2022

1) just like in the waiting room of the geriatrics, this is technical poem about getting old, but do they get senile? Not all of them? There are elderly people who are very old

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 August 2021

Seems that you are a very matured poet... writing so well. Keep writing and keeping refreshing minds of readers with words of wisdom!

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