Old Age Poem by Isatou Juwara

Old Age

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My grandmother, she's so old
has no teeth
poor grandmother, once the village beauty
can hardly see
to talk to gandmother, i have to shout
for grandmother
can barely hear.

But she can walk long distance places
with energy emanating from bygone days
when relentlessly she toiled under the African sun

So now when young men
ask me for a dance
i cannot help but wonder
at my old age
who will???

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqeb Benazir 09 August 2011

the first para is beautifully expressed...very nice and true.

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David Holbrook 10 August 2011

My Mother is 90...she is loved by so many people..beauty has many forms..

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Saadat Tahir 17 August 2011

abso brill lovely lines.....well written and conceived..... liked em :) sat

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phoebe 02 February 2018

well Isatou I think that poem was great

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M Asim Nehal 02 November 2016

Deep meaning hidden in your poems....Loved it, loved it...

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Daniel Tait 03 September 2012

Well written. Enjoyed it immensly.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 01 September 2012

A very thought of poem. I like this poem

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Allemagne Roßmann 26 August 2011

An adage before the start of craddle again.Well said and written...

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