To whom it may concern;
Am sorry,
for leaving in a hurry
i hate to leave so
but i have to go
so you can know
that although
you gave me the world
my heart feels cold
for deep within me
i cannot see
what used to be
but let me promise you
that even as it takes me through
an entire life
i shall strive
to find
what i lost inside
and one day soon
am coming home for good
But until then......................
God bless you!
A letter best served cold to hot tempered people when they are husbands bashing up wives......I like the idea here.It can change characters though i am not sure if it had ever changed lives.
This is spiced up and i have to say, flows really well and it's very light...true, we need pieces like this to keep ourselves from being lost within the deepness of poems...thanks for the read.
yes, this is a lovely poem. Mainly because i can relate and because i have some hope in me that this will be the case in my situation, that our paths will meet again. Thankyou for allowing me to read this poem. Cheers Face without a name
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice parting letter.