***old Man So Young Poem by Sylvi Sylva

***old Man So Young

Rating: 2.9


Old man so young
Old tricks, new belt, old bag o’ nails
New shoes, same feet, now going flat
To me, a young man, so full of heart
An old man full of himself, just hisself

Old man so young
Old skin, new cells, old bag o’ bones
New hat, same eyes, now needing sight
To me, a young hero, rising from scarring fights
A rich man full of himself, just hisself

Old man so young
Old voice, new teeth, old bag o’ sand
New hip, same dance, soul in his veins
To me, a young baron, whose time will long reign
An epic full of himself, just hisself

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 09 January 2008

Loved the meter loved the poem, this is very well writ. Bob

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Marcus Czarnecki 06 January 2008

Reminds me of Mr Bojangles Thank you Marcus

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Duncan Wyllie 04 January 2008

Looking on at the guy who you still see so much strength and dignity in brilliantly placed Love duncan X

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John Nightingale 04 January 2008

I love this. Brilliant concept.

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Broken Peaces 03 January 2008

Clever use of words great content 10 Chris

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