On A Judgment Day Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

On A Judgment Day



First a dressing down
On a Judgment Day,
And then a new dress!
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Haiku | 18.12.2017 |

Tuesday, March 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Birth gives the soul a new body, akin to getting a new dress.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 04 September 2019

Thanks for Poet's Notes. perhaps believers in reincarnation have a good idea/plan/theory. but i doubt reincarnation will ever be proven (to my satisfaction) , just as this ex-Christian [me] believes God and Jesus will never be proven. at first i thought the poem meant something else.: that maybe i WOULD get a new dress...in. Or maybe they'd keep me in pants.....OR my 'birthday suit'.. cute! bri :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 September 2019

And one long comment is not acceptable, but if you split in two, it is fine. How childish!

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 September 2019

Now look at this, I had tried to answer in rather detail, and PH tells me to make it short. Not that, it removes it from its memory as well. And I hate to right it again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 March 2019

Judgement is done with new dress and this judgement is beautifully nourished with trust and wisdom. This is an amazing poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 March 2019

Yes., a dressing down on a Judgment Day much before getting a new dress, thank you Kumarmani Mahakul..

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