On A Parking Lot... Poem by Aufie Zophy

On A Parking Lot...

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A lonely flower spouted from a tiny seed
it had to work its way through cement and concrete
It managed to grow and finally succeed
'cause beauty was not a mere desire but a need

Friday, January 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,perseverance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We may be living in a harsh worldlooking more like a parking lot than like a paradise, with plenty of cars ready to drive over our small attempts at beauty.But there is nothing, that can contain the seeds planted in our heart No matter how thick the layers of cement and concrete, the seeds of beauty, the seeds of love and kindness, the seeds of honesty, the seeds of compassion and awe, will work their way through and finally succeed to blossom into wonderful flowers and make our world look more like a paradise than like a parking lot...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 12 February 2018

Lovely thoughts and so true all the way through.Much said with great brevity and great rhyme

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Unwritten Soul 01 February 2018

Such a strong and motivational thoughts and thanks for your mind that translate the close observation! its golden one

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Hans , 01 February 2018

Thanks, Soul

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