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Y..... The Balloon

Rating: 2.4

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

I brought this balloon, so blue
all the way, especially for you

So, quick, quick, quick
Give this balloon a prick

let's bathe in its content
a sea of love, to never end


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Aufie Zophy
Bachok

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A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 23 October 2012

A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 October 2012

Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 17 October 2012

This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife well done dear

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Nader Baheri 22 October 2012

so romantically piece of written. tnx for sharing

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Joseph Anderson 14 October 2012

A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this- Wow! would not any wife appreciate this

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blessings 29 September 2020

when i read this poem it touchs my heart

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2016

I love this poem. I would never go to the trouble of getting a sea into a balloon, but I’m glad YOU did! I also am not usually a fan of “love poems”, but I’ll make an exception this time. I’m also a big fan of rhyming. bri :) p.s. here is my version of the sea of love: bri's sea of love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love fishes Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love Love

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Dutendra Chamling 25 November 2015

Beautiful love poem...............!

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Akhtar Jawad 09 January 2015

You reminded me of two lines from an Urdu poet, Jigar Muradabadi- - - - Ek lafz-e-muhabbat ka adna yeh fasana hay Simte to dil-e-aashiq phaile to zamana hay (It's a short story of the word love, when converges becomes heart of a lover. when diverges becomes an universe. A great poem...................10

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Sankar Sehanabis 24 October 2014

Awesome! A nice romantic poem.

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