On A Rainy Day Like This Poem by Miss Grace

On A Rainy Day Like This

Rating: 5.0


On a rainy day like this
I fell in love with you
On a rainy day I this
I am breaking up with you
On a rainy day like this
I had first met you
On a rainy day like this
I am badly missing you

Our story started with rain
Now I ended up in pain
Our story started with joy
It ended with me being a toy

On a rainy day like this
You had first kissed me
On a rainy day like this
You cheated on me
On a rainy day like this
You proposed to me
On a rainy day like this
You broke me

Our story ended in the rain
Now I am no more sane
Our story ended on a rainy day like this
Now I am no more his......

Sunday, June 19, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Like weather like mood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 20 June 2022

Tears from the sky, so well reflect the disappointing sadness in this poem, that so intensely cries. Sadly wonderful piece

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 June 2022

Bravo Miss Grace, I feel yr pain

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Score five star and to Myfav

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Beautiful story of love and a sad break up. Though the poet concedes that "you broke me", the poem ends is very positive note, sheds lot of sunshine. Very good poem. Enjoyed the recurring images of rain.top

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