On Her Way To School Poem by Sanjukta Nag

On Her Way To School

Rating: 5.0


She followed the striped cat
Stepping slowly - one two three,
Then became bore to count more,
And left her school bag hanging
On the branch of a tree.

Her favourite tiffin box - blue
Without showing any clue
Dropped in the middle of street,
To give the illiterate hungry dogs
A sudden delicious treat.

She followed the striped cat,
Forgetting her school and rule
Of knotty arithmetic,
It was only her curious eyes
And brown legs of the cat
Were leading her - automatic.

They crossed a lofty wall
To land on the greenish ground
Where the little girl found,
Four kittens of big blue eyes,
Lying in a cane basket
With furs of chocolate pies.

Though she had lost her way,
Her eyes were still gleaming
Like a bright sunny day.
‘Cause she realized already,
This joy is more genuine
Than her lots of dolls & teddy.

Wednesday, September 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 24 September 2015

Being careless and neglecting study sometimes is fun. Lovely drop. A kids is being careless going to school and it gives such a sweet feeling.

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M Asim Nehal 24 September 2015

Reminded my school days, full of enthusiasm, naughtiness and playfulness..................The best teacher is life and the best way to learn is to learn from own experience by defying norms set by society/ sets of rules with Do's and Dont's.............Lovely satire tucked with emotions........Loved it

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Kaustubh Vadher 24 September 2015

It is very beautifully describing a little cute baby girl going to school!

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Bharati Nayak 23 September 2015

Wonderful poem about following one's heart!

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Valsa George 02 October 2015

The little girl, though got late in reaching the school, was gifted with the joy of seeing four little kittens in a basket! What a cute sight! Even at this age, I identify myself with that little girl! In my young days, birds and kittens used to fascinate me more than anything! Even now I try to take care of stray cats, for which I am often scolded by my husband as my son as a child had to take rabies injections for having been bitten by a cat! Enjoyed the poem Sanjukta!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 25 September 2015

Like a bright sunny day this poem reflects very amazing and vivid imagery about cats and little girl. ‘Cause she realized already, This joy is more genuine Than her lots of dolls & teddy. Having affection for animals and drawing such imagery speaks about natural flow of emotion. Very wise sharing....10

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Liza Sudina 25 September 2015

Cats are really very winsome! and ofcourse more genuinethan dolls!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 September 2015

Verily, adventurous and amusing

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 September 2015

A sudden delicious treat; with the muse of love and care. Nice work.

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